Scars

Life has left her with scars from head to toe

Some will fade and some will be with her forever

The ones that she can cover are easy for her to cope with mentally

But it’s the ones that are left exposed that tears at her heart

Knowing her body will never look the same makes her fall apart

~Belladonna~

12 Replies to “Scars”

  1. Nice.. such poetry draws me in!

    I like how you stretch out the words to stress a personal touch to the pain she bares. Because you’d agree that there might be a shorter version to express the same thoughts.

    This is how I see it, more cause the stretch would sound great on spoken. (amplify the emotions, tone, sufferings).

    Here’s what I mean… hope you don’t mind, Belladonna. . .

    Life has left her with scars
    Some will fade and some will be
    The ones she covers are easy to cope
    But some left exposed, tears at her heart
    Her body will never look the same
    Just knowing, makes her fall apart

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