Life has left her with scars from head to toe
Some will fade and some will be with her forever
The ones that she can cover are easy for her to cope with mentally
But it’s the ones that are left exposed that tears at her heart
Knowing her body will never look the same makes her fall apart
12 Replies to “Scars”
That is a powerful verse! Very powerful and such a haunting image too!
Thank you! I was feeling dark 🙃
That picture captures what I was trying to express and I agree it is haunting!
Well, sometimes great things emerge from the darkness 😉
It sure does!
and this was one of them 🙂
Thank you for saying so… means so much to me!
You are so very welcome!!!! 🙂
Nice.. such poetry draws me in!
I like how you stretch out the words to stress a personal touch to the pain she bares. Because you’d agree that there might be a shorter version to express the same thoughts.
This is how I see it, more cause the stretch would sound great on spoken. (amplify the emotions, tone, sufferings).
Here’s what I mean… hope you don’t mind, Belladonna. . .
Life has left her with scars
Some will fade and some will be
The ones she covers are easy to cope
But some left exposed, tears at her heart
Her body will never look the same
Just knowing, makes her fall apart
Honestly, I’m not really seeing the difference
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