Every show about selling or purchasing a home made it seem as though the buyers or sellers were making the decision. But after seeing what Eliza has seen, she’s sure it’s just the opposite. This personal realization has completely changed her perspective.
Eliza, a mere 12-year-old, was oblivious to the unexpected secrets that the house held. The mystery, like a shroud, enveloped her innocent mind, shielding her from the eerie truths. As she explored the house, she often felt a presence, as if someone was walking alongside her.
Every so often, she stopped walking and turned around, expecting to see someone looking back at her. With a puzzled look on her face and an exhale of relief, she turned back around and hoped that she would feel the presence of whatever that was go away.
It never did!
Although Eliza was only 12 years old, she was acutely aware that the house her parents had chosen was not just new but also steeped in the land’s history. Like all lands, the land had a story to tell, a story that predated the arrival of the builders.
When her three sisters, brother, mom, and dad moved into the house, their family dynamics instantly changed. Her father’s discomfort around them was palpable. If Eliza or one of her siblings entered a room he was in, he would startle as if the room was ablaze and rush to another room, or he would vanish for days at a time.
When he finally made his way back home, Eliza’s mom would tell her and her siblings to run and hug him and tell him how much they missed him. She warned them that if they didn’t, he would leave again and not come back.
So, with a heavy heart, they would hug him and pretend that they missed him, but deep inside, they all knew that he was not who he used to be. The house had already claimed his soul.
To be continued!
You could have chosen any blog to read, but you chose mine, and I’m honored!
~Belladonna~


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I found this post very useful.
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ummmm okay!
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A spooky story with an intriguing intro. Looking forward to reading more. 👍🏻
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Intriguing story Belladonna
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Thank you so much!!!
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Most welcome 🤗
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“The House had already claimed his soul.”
And if he isn’t exorcised, that’ll be the end of him and probably them, too. I am here for this story!
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oh I love this I want to know more! xoxo
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I’m so glad you liked it! A lot more is coming.
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Wow, this story pulls you right into the mystery of the house and how it affects the family. Eliza’s awareness at such a young age shows her strength, even in the face of the unknown. I can’t wait to see where this journey leads her and her family. Sometimes, the places we live in hold secrets that teach us more about ourselves than we ever expected. Excited about the continuation! 🔥
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You are so RIGHT!!!!! Te places we live can and does teach us so much!
I’m so glad you liked it and I can’t wait to post the next one!
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Spooky!
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Thank you…. It’s Halloween time!
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oh my… waiting hauntingly💓😉
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Yayyyyyyyy! Thank you
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Can’t wait to read what happens next!
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Thank you! I’ll be posting it soon.
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That’s an eerie story indeed, I am intrigued!
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Yayyy that’s what I was going for.
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Your story gives me chills, and I can’t wait to see how it continues!
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Thank you! I had so much fun writing this and will be posting part two shortly.
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YAY! I can’t wait!
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Damn Queen B…spooooookyyyyyyyy!!! 🧛🏻♂️🦇👻
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LOLOLOL thank ya girl!
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You are so very welcome Queen B! 👻🤣🦇
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Perfect for the season! Can’t wait for the rest!
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Yes!!!!!! Thank you so much!
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My pleasure Bella!
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Yes I believe the house chose them. Sometimes people think everything is coincidence, but most times it’s destiny…thank you for sharing! Good and juicy, my kind of stuff! Halloween season is here!!?!🎃👻💀
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I am so darn happy that y’all like this story. I’m having a lot of fun writing it. Halloween is a great time of year!!!
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Yes keep going!
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You tryin to kill me Belladonna. Ha, ha, very spooky. “The house had already claimed his soul.” Ooooh, looks like someone is ready for Halloween. Ha, ha.
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LOLOL Brian I am so ready for Halloween!!! Oh how I love it.
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I kind of guessed that! Ha ha!
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LOL
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It’s strange. I would like to read second part before commenting.
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Second part coming soon. Thank you for reading KK
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Will look forward to it. Thanks!
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Spooky!
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Thanks Samo!
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