Repost: I remember what I was feeling when I wrote this. More so I remember how my heart was feeling. As I wrote this I released so much anxiety.
Will You forgive me when my world grows dark
When my chest rises for the last time
When the doctor closes my eyes shut
Will you forgive me then
Who I am is nothing you dreamed of
When I speak the words you hear are hot and burns your soul
When your eyes meet mine I feel the distance and it’s cold
Who I am is someone with a soul that you chose to disown
When I’m gone
Will you then choose to forgive me for being everything you hated
And remember me well
52 Replies to “Forgive Me Well”
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Powerful poem. I loved it.
My soul wrote this one. Thank you 🙏🏽
love this and I love you so much <3
Love you baby girl! I’mglad you liked my poem. Means alot coming from you
Oh wow, this one is very moving! I’m wondering now about forgiveness and all that goes along with it. I “forgive” you for taking me down this line of thought 🤣💗
Thank you so much! I’m glad that you almost started a blog! LOL
If you do please let me know and I will be sure to follow
Yayyy! Please come back as often as you can! I thank you so much for the wonderful compliment!
Bravo👏🏻 touching ❤️❤️
♥️🙏🏽 Thank you so much!
Beautiful poem filled with emotion.
♥️♥️Thank you!! I appreciate your kind words
Beautiful words, I felt this.
Huge thank you 🙏🏽♥️♥️♥️
Wow this truly touched me to the core. Powerful and I will need to save this with your permission so I can read it whenever I need to. 🙏🏼
THANK YOU!!!!! Of course you can. I’m honored ♥️😂😂
Thank you so much beautiful soul YOU 💙💙💙
Wow, that is a wonderful piece of writing 💖
Thank you so much!!!!!💗💗💖
Wow! Wonderful poem! You are amazing Belladonna.
Thank’s for share your art. Have a lovely week ahead!
So appreciate you 💖💖💖
Have a great Monday my beautiful friend
Aww! Thank’s dear friend.
You are so sweet. You as well.
Thank you Sadje💖💖💖
Nice one, and so emotional too 😢
Thank you!!!! 💗💗💗
Amazing piece, Belladonna . Love it.💕
Thank you Grace💖💖💖💖
My pleasure 💕
Beautifully expressed Belladonna. Untethered anxiety! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼 Forgiveness is such a liberating thing. 🤗💖🥰
It sure is!!!! 🙌🏽🙌🏽🙌🏽💖💖💖💖
Amazingly powerul, and elegant. I love this write, Belladonna. ❤️
I’m so honored that you enjoyed this one 😍😍😍
I’m happy this is so. 😍😍😍
Full of the deepest concerns, so heart-wrenching.
I was in my feelings when I wrote this but I am so happy I wrote. I was able to let some things go and power forward 😊
I relate with this. Great post. Anxiety is so hard.
Thank you! Yes it definitely is. And it’s so good to talk about it so we can release tension.
Such a sad, beautiful, and powerful poem!
Thank you and unfortunately it was my truth but I felt so much better after expressing my feelings. 😍
I’m so glad!